First? Well anyway, this was so besutiful! Just as beautiful as it was sad and depressing. But I grow bored of only cheap happines, so I really liked this. The way you write Aoi's feelings are so authentic and I reall feel all of his emotions. Poor Aoi, keep getting hurt all the time, and not even Kai (the brightest sunshine in the universe) can help him. And I feel so bad for Uruha. He doesn't deserve any of it, but what can you do. And I like your new style, not that I disliked the old one, but news things are always welcome^^ I'm definetly looking forward to the continuation:)
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Well anyway, this was so besutiful! Just as beautiful as it was sad and depressing. But I grow bored of only cheap happines, so I really liked this.
The way you write Aoi's feelings are so authentic and I reall feel all of his emotions.
Poor Aoi, keep getting hurt all the time, and not even Kai (the brightest sunshine in the universe) can help him.
And I feel so bad for Uruha. He doesn't deserve any of it, but what can you do.
And I like your new style, not that I disliked the old one, but news things are always welcome^^
I'm definetly looking forward to the continuation:)